It’s this sky that has embraced the lake in blue,
It’s the Sun that caresses the flower to bloom,
When miles so long, fail to Love’s piercing view,
What good, O Maiden, is this wall between rooms!!!
errrrr...now that's naughty! You would want to replace the last sentence with
O Maiden, this distant heart has thy love in loom!
6 comments:
why does it sound like you've told this line to someone?
Coz that's my ringtone
u have a different style of writing altogether..
:-) Perceptions so many, to that one fact. phew
Hey kaushalya! nice to see you here. Idu 'avalu"kaaga! aval varuvala...varuvala!!! hehe
better naughty than haughty!
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